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After listening to this song:

youtu.be/KoT1cSY-LhM


I'm thinking of it either being a furry based story or human related. I would say furry as I could best draw that but humans would attract more people. So while I give the description I'll just say "man" but It's unidentified as furry or human yet.


I've started to come up with a movie idea (that couldn't happen) but I figured I could do in literature. The prologue (or if it was a trailer), would be an older man in his 20s walking through the rain with cuts and bruises on his face. A young boy breaks the silence as he offers his umbrella to the man which surprises him at first. The man asks if his parents have ever told him not to talk to strangers. The boy says they have but they also told him to be generous and help people. This surprises the man as he takes the offer and walks with the boy while holding the umbrella for both of them.

Sound nice?

So I would like the older male to be a gay man who get's bullied and attacked for being a homosexual. This leads him to become lonely but the little boy befriends him trying to bring some light into his life. 

It would be a heart warming tale but of course it would have a huge plot twist with something involving the boy that I really don't want to give away.

So what do you guys think? I'm not the best writer as I have issues with punctuation but I'm sure people would be willing to help me.

Also I'm trying to think of a title name. "Under the Umbrella, Under Our Umbrella, Our Umbrella." Are pretty basic titles from what I've found so if anybody could help me I would really appreciate it.

But yeah, I would totally love feedback on the plot, title, and should it be a furry or human based story.

<3
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yashu204 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey Hige! It's me yashu204 from Pokestadium :D You might have the slightest memory of me or a huge memory :)
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AchillesWolf Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Slightly 
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RemmyFox Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
ice artz!
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AchillesWolf Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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TheHyenaintown Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey :)
Uhm.. You faved my Steele pic before a short time and I wondered whether you've seen the Anthro version of Steele? Was just curious :D

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Hope you don't mind my curiosity :D (and like anthro) xD
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AchillesWolf Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Student General Artist
It's very nice! I'm sure I saw it but I rarely favorite things these days unless It's mainly a bookmark for me to look back on or if I want to learn about it more. 
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TheHyenaintown Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay no problem ^^ :D I kinda always feel like showing new stuff to people who once faved and commented :) :D
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Kitamon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank you for the :+fav: :) Really appreciated! :D Check out my facebook page: www.facebook.com/pages/Kitamon… also I am doing a giveaway soon!
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Pokepower888 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hige! *flying tackle hug*
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AchillesWolf Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Pokepower! *Falls back from hug*
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